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The Judge said, "Hang the man high!"
Tomorrow at noon's when I'll die
But come nightfall he'll see
What rage lives in me
No safety on land, sea or sky
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I would love to see what happens at nightfall and if he really does avoid the noose..it's amazing how you are able to tell a story in so few words..Jae
ReplyDeleteA lovely "lofty" limerick!! I hand it high!!
ReplyDeleteThe judgement on this one is that it will remain in my memory for a long while :D
Good one as always!!
Sometimes a word's worth a thousand pictures? Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteDouble Duty
Wow! Strong. Decisive! The rage shows greatly
ReplyDeleteCleverly done! A drama in a few words.
ReplyDeleteVengeful sort, aintcha? :) Good poem; you created a lot with very few words.
ReplyDeleteNo belly disfunction here?
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed the military vibe.
My 3ww took me by surprise.