I dare myself to hope
My work's not tripe or trope
A practical endeavor
For a man so clever
The essence of the way we writers cope.
Here's something new - listen to me read it (go ahead and click - it's only 12 seconds long):
Boy, the mic on that webcam is lousy, isn't it?
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Sounds great, Tony!
ReplyDeleteI love how these audio boos are starting to crop up.
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This was fun to read but I also nodded in agreement. I wanted to see how Three Word Wednesday works. This looks like fun.
ReplyDeleteWe writers must have this attitude, or we would not, could not write!
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading it, but you were right, the few seconds of listening to the audio was worth the click. Very expressive.
ReplyDeleteI loved this ... and it was great to hear you read it!
ReplyDeletedeft linguistics and a joy to hear...
ReplyDeleteIt was like listening to 'Lake Wobegone'..made me feel in safe writerly hands! Jae ;)
ReplyDeleteSo true that is how we cope.it was fun to read. It sounded great in audio too.
ReplyDeleteWhoopee! The cadence in my head was the same as your spoken tempo - I'm capable of getting some things right.
ReplyDeleteWe can but get it down, and hope for the best.
Well..everything has been already said.. I liked your take on the prompts.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed your writing...and your recitation! Thanks!
ReplyDeleteTony, Nice take on the prompt!
ReplyDeleteMight I suggest the rhythm would improve if the last line were, "The essence of how writers cope"?
I'm a songwriter, and I read everyone's work aloud, so that came up for me. Fun hearing you read as well! Nice addition to the blog.
Happy 3WW, Amy Barlow Liberatore
Thanks for reading, and for the great comments, everyone! Amy,, you're ear is terrific; I like your final line a lot. I had a lot of trouble working the final word ("essence") into the poem, hence the rat-a-tat-tat of the final line.
ReplyDeleteLove it!
ReplyDeleteWell you got them all in a small space, we had the bonus of a voice over and it all made sense. What more could we ask?
ReplyDeleteIt was interesting read.. thanks for sharing..
ReplyDeleteॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/02/whispers-another-kind-of-valentines-day.html
Enjoyable, clever.
ReplyDeleteThis was so muc fun to hear in your voice! Amazing!
ReplyDeleteThanks for the vocal! You put writing in a nutshell very will indeed.
ReplyDeletethis was fresh- quite unique. loved it.
ReplyDeletetrisha
http://sharmishthabasu.wordpress.com/2011/02/16/dare