Wednesday Poetry: Figure, Juicy, Stress

Welcome to my regular Wednesday poetry corner, brought to you by Three Word Wednesday and One Shot Wednesday.

Today's words are figure, juicy, stress.

Green eyes, pale thighs, made him stress,
And her figure, just made for that dress!
Could that juicy peach
Cause a marital breach?
He straightened his tie, nonetheless.








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18 comments:

  1. Ruchira MandalFeb 23, 2011, 7:55:00 AM

    So much said in so few words. Awesome.

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  2. AnonymousFeb 23, 2011, 8:29:00 AM

    I keep hearing Austin Powers chanting, "Margaret Thatcher on a cold day!"

    Love this!

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  3. Jae RoseFeb 23, 2011, 8:36:00 AM

    'Juicy peaches' can indeed be hard to resist..I hope he indulged only in the pleasure of looking..Jae

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  4. Brian MillerFeb 23, 2011, 9:14:00 AM

    ahem...lol. perhaps he is just admiring beauty...until he gets slapped...lol

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  5. anthonynorthFeb 23, 2011, 10:25:00 AM

    Nice one - and not too far removed from mine ;-)

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  6. AltonianFeb 23, 2011, 11:09:00 AM

    I think anyone would straighten his tie, faced with a vision like that. Very good indeed.

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  7. Tony NolandFeb 23, 2011, 2:12:00 PM

    @Ruchiraa: Thank you! Brevity is the soul of poetry.

    @Apple: I'm afraid I don't get the reference, but I'm glad you liked it!

    @Jae: The tie straightening is always a bad sign.

    @Brian: "I was just looking! Honest!"

    @Anthonynorth: Great minds think alike!

    @Old Altonian: "I think anyone would straighten his tie, faced with a vision like that." I'm pretty sure it's genetic. 8-)

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  8. Sheilagh LeeFeb 23, 2011, 2:22:00 PM

    Sheilagh Lee said:strung together brilliantly I really enjoyed your poem

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  9. Old EggFeb 23, 2011, 4:03:00 PM

    You gave us the eyes but our imagination gave us the rest. I even popped a mint in my mouth!

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  10. UnknownFeb 23, 2011, 4:34:00 PM

    Provocative, Tony!
    Here's mine:
    http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2011/02/23/beautiful-man/

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  11. rmpWritingsFeb 23, 2011, 9:02:00 PM

    Sinfully simple. It never hurts to look...

    Love how you used the three words.

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  12. rebeccaFeb 23, 2011, 11:29:00 PM

    then stop looking at the juicy peach... ;)

    well done.

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  13. trishaFeb 24, 2011, 7:22:00 AM

    this was hilarious! just hilarious.

    trisha
    http://sharmishthabasu.wordpress.com/2011/02/24/stress/

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  14. Grandma's GoulashFeb 24, 2011, 3:29:00 PM

    Loved it. We seem to have a bit of guy bashing in the comments. So in their defense:

    I'd like all the women who have never stood a little straighter, finger combed their hair or sucked in their tummy at the sight of a good looking guy to raise their hands.

    Funny, I'm not seeing any hands!


    My 3WW: The Good Life

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  15. LilibethFeb 24, 2011, 9:02:00 PM

    uh-oh. Trouble in a few sentences. So well done.

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  16. Tony NolandFeb 24, 2011, 9:33:00 PM

    @Sheilagh: Thank you!

    @oldegg: Often, it's just the suggestion of the rest that is the most potent enticement. 8-)

    @Kim: Thanks, Kim!

    @rmpWritings: "It never hurts to look..." ... unless your wife happens to be standing right behind you.

    @rebecca: "then stop looking at the juicy peach... ";) Easier said than done!

    @trisha: Thank you, I'm glad you liked it!

    @Grandma's Goulash: The instinctive reaction to a hot commodity is ingrained in everyone, to be sure.

    @Lilibeth: Thanks!

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  17. Thom GabrukiewiczFeb 24, 2011, 9:39:00 PM

    you are the man, Tony. This is top-notch.

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  18. Jay R. ThurstonFeb 26, 2011, 10:32:00 AM

    Echoing the other comments, you said a lot with a little, this was both impressive and memorable. Great, Tony!

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