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Wednesday #Poetry: Bump, Knuckle, Transfix

Welcome to my regular Wednesday poetry corner, brought to you by Three Word Wednesday and One Shot Wednesday.

Today's words are Bump, Knuckle, Transfix.

From belly bump I felt you grow
With thrashing and kicks to and fro.
You suckle your knuckle
And make my knees buckle
Dear child, how you transfix me so!















By the way, special Happy Anniversary congratulations to One Shot Wednesday, which today celebrates one year of bringing more poetry into the world. Keep up the good work, guys!

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22 comments:

  1. That was really sweet. Brought a smile to my face. :) I agree with your statement on Twitter, though. Back to the murder and mayhem!

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  2. ha, big smiles...i have 2 little boys myself...

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  3. What a beautiful image to begin my morning. Sweet!

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  4. Sweet piece, loving where you went with the prompts on this. Delicately shining on new lives.

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  5. A content little sleeping baby of a piece..Jae

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  6. Nicely stated and great rhyme play!

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  7. A very touching piece. Thank you. My 3WW: http://verseinanutshell.wordpress.com/2011/06/29/next/

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  8. Sheilagh Lee: aw how sweet this was a very tender and loving poem.:)

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  9. Aww... so sweet. Love this one, Tony!

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  10. Utterly precious. One of my favorites of the day.

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  11. Thanks for reading, everyone. I usually go for funny or topical, but as soon as I saw the word "bump" for 3WW, that was it. 8-)

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  12. Beautiful and sweet. I love how everyone brings their unique take to the prompt.

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  13. That is so beautiful!
    Blessings

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  14. A rarity among limericks - sweet and sentimental. Nice!

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  15. Wonderful limerick! Very sweet, can see you rocking him to sleep while softly repeating this.

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  16. really a sweet one - didn't know you had the nostalgia in you
    ;-P

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  17. That's really clever... I'm impressed :)

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  18. it's amazing how something so small can have the power to bring one to their knees. very sweet!

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