Welcome to my regular Wednesday poetry corner, brought to you by Three Word Wednesday and One Shot Wednesday. Today's words are Erratic, Luminous, Omen.
I don't mean to sound so dramatic,
But this omen is really erratic
The luminous chains
And moans of great pains
Make me fear what's up in the attic!
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You're up early. Ah, the things that scare us up in the attic
ReplyDeleteI wanted to do a limerick too, but couldn't think of how to rhyme it. You succeeded wonderfully.
ReplyDeleteAs long as it's not bats in the belfry! LOL
ReplyDeleteMaybe some old darts trophies? :)
ReplyDeleteHow fun! A great limeric putting together the three words. Great work.
ReplyDeleteSheilagh Lee: the things in the attic yes those bumps are scary.Great limerick
ReplyDeleteThanks for reading & commenting, everyone!
ReplyDeleteJanet, you have a very good memory!
Great limerick! Having lived with a poltergeist, I know what it's like to be uneasy at home.
ReplyDeleteoh i would be so tempted to go take a look honestly....
ReplyDeleteI agree with Andy, nice limeric connecting the three words. Cheers.
ReplyDeleteVery cute! It's the kind of poem you can share with kids. Great limerick connecting the words.
ReplyDeleteHa - great limerick!
ReplyDeleteI advise you not to go up there!
ReplyDeleteVery clever. Nice rhyming, too. Good job.
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed this very much.
ReplyDeleteI fear the only thing in my attic is cobwebs...Yuck~!
An engaging and truthful. Funny are the things that frighten us. My 3WW: http://verseinanutshell.wordpress.com/2011/06/02/dare/
ReplyDeleteI like the way you rhymed this.
ReplyDeleteNicely-done! Clever and greatly rhymed!
ReplyDeleteHaha very cute I do agree though attics are spooky!
ReplyDeleteGreat now I have something else to think about while I am trying to fall asleep!
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