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Wednesday #Poetry: Erratic, Luminous, Omen

Welcome to my regular Wednesday poetry corner, brought to you by Three Word Wednesday and One Shot Wednesday.

Today's words are Erratic, Luminous, Omen.

I don't mean to sound so dramatic,
But this omen is really erratic
The luminous chains
And moans of great pains
Make me fear what's up in the attic!

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20 comments:

  1. Thom GabrukiewiczJun 1, 2011, 8:40:00 AM

    You're up early. Ah, the things that scare us up in the attic

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  2. LilibethJun 1, 2011, 8:55:00 AM

    I wanted to do a limerick too, but couldn't think of how to rhyme it. You succeeded wonderfully.

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  3. JinksyJun 1, 2011, 9:24:00 AM

    As long as it's not bats in the belfry! LOL

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  4. Janet Lingel AldrichJun 1, 2011, 12:02:00 PM

    Maybe some old darts trophies? :)

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  5. andymac89Jun 1, 2011, 12:05:00 PM

    How fun! A great limeric putting together the three words. Great work.

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  6. Sheilagh LeeJun 1, 2011, 12:56:00 PM

    Sheilagh Lee: the things in the attic yes those bumps are scary.Great limerick

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  7. Tony NolandJun 1, 2011, 1:20:00 PM

    Thanks for reading & commenting, everyone!

    Janet, you have a very good memory!

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  8. AltonianJun 1, 2011, 1:27:00 PM

    Great limerick! Having lived with a poltergeist, I know what it's like to be uneasy at home.

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  9. Brian MillerJun 1, 2011, 1:52:00 PM

    oh i would be so tempted to go take a look honestly....

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  10. CgullJun 1, 2011, 3:39:00 PM

    I agree with Andy, nice limeric connecting the three words. Cheers.

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  11. Jess PJJun 1, 2011, 4:13:00 PM

    Very cute! It's the kind of poem you can share with kids. Great limerick connecting the words.

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  12. Other MaryJun 1, 2011, 4:43:00 PM

    Ha - great limerick!

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  13. Rinkly RimesJun 1, 2011, 7:14:00 PM

    I advise you not to go up there!

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  14. gsb3Jun 1, 2011, 8:24:00 PM

    Very clever. Nice rhyming, too. Good job.

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  15. AnonymousJun 2, 2011, 9:46:00 AM

    Enjoyed this very much.
    I fear the only thing in my attic is cobwebs...Yuck~!

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  16. AnonymousJun 2, 2011, 1:39:00 PM

    An engaging and truthful. Funny are the things that frighten us. My 3WW: http://verseinanutshell.wordpress.com/2011/06/02/dare/

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  17. Andy SewinaJun 2, 2011, 6:50:00 PM

    I like the way you rhymed this.

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  18. Mariya KolevaJun 4, 2011, 9:08:00 AM

    Nicely-done! Clever and greatly rhymed!

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  19. AnonymousJun 5, 2011, 9:04:00 AM

    Haha very cute I do agree though attics are spooky!

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  20. ChristineJun 5, 2011, 5:03:00 PM

    Great now I have something else to think about while I am trying to fall asleep!

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