#FridayFlash: Babbling Brooke (NSFW)

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Babbling Brooke

by Tony Noland

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18 comments:

  1. Interesting. Not the ending I was expecting. Very good, Mr. Noland. :)

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  2. This was a lot different from your usual stuff but that's no bad thing. Methinks Mr Noland has a dark side!

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  3. Red: Nobody expects the Spanish Inquisition.

    Icy: Dark side? Me? Oh, my goodness yes.

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  4. An excellent compromise. Well done. I really was expecting something Truly Evil™ to happen to Brooke, but I think it works just fine.

    I have to ask though... Does she get her Belle rung?

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  5. **thumbs up** Defiantly a different piece, might have needed a cold shower is there was much more ;)

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  6. Wow, quite a bit different from your usual fare. A bit on the S&M side, but very well done!

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  7. Dang Tony. You should write a cheesy romance novel. It'd be a bestseller.

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  8. D. Paul: You didn't think this was Truly Evil™? But in order to summon the devil you need Belle, Brooke and candle...

    Anthony: Glad you liked it! 8-)

    ganymeder: Yep, "different" is the order of the day here.

    John Pender: You should write a cheesy romance novel. Is there any other kind? 8-)

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  9. Yikes! I'm going to go read it again....

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  10. Oh my goodness - once again, you have led us into thick literary layers and still served up some hot, waxy entertainment. I am, as usual, in awe, Mr. Noland.

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  11. The first two paragraphs add up to something so darned funny. Yes, I get the dark spots it goes to, but my strongest reaction was up front. Of course a dude is proud of his work!

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  12. Wow you surprised me with that ending, me thinks too you have a darkish side Mr. T. ^_^

    helen-scribbles

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  13. Blimey Tony, hot stuff! Showing us once again you are master of the craft in many different styles and guises. Totally mesmerizing.

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  14. whew! fanning self. darkly erotic in a story of o sort of way. ;^0

    peace...

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  15. You kept the excitement level high and twisted a bit at the ending. Excellent job!

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  16. Wasn't expecting that ending! LOL You are right, it is pretty different from your usual work. So . . . was it fun?

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  17. pegjet: It gets better on the second reading. 8-)

    Apple: I'm happy to be of service, Ms. Scott.

    John: I know I always am. Of course, I do a fist pump every time I hit the hamper with my socks.

    Helen: Not fully dark, though. Only dark-ish. ;-)

    Alison: I'm glad you liked it!

    Linda: Heh, I hope that's a good sort of reaction.

    Eric: Thanks, Eric!

    storytreasury: So . . . was it fun? This question needs a full blog post to answer properly. Look for it tomorrow morning.

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