Wednesday #Poetry: Gasp, Mute, Viable

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Today's words are Gasp, Mute, Viable.

She asked with a gasp, "Viable?
Und vy is dat bottle haf-full?"
I stood stupid and mute
With my sketch of a brute,
So sloshed that I saw it duh-bull.




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10 comments:

  1. DeborahAug 17, 2011, 9:09:00 AM

    Oh I just loved this! Well done :o)

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  2. ScribblerAug 17, 2011, 10:16:00 AM

    That was so funny and such a unique take, I loved it :)

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  3. RJ ClarkenAug 17, 2011, 10:18:00 AM

    lol! Well done! ☼

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  4. DaydreamerAug 17, 2011, 11:53:00 AM

    LOL very witty!
    A half bottle of what!! Dare I ask....LOL

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  5. Sheilagh LeeAug 17, 2011, 11:53:00 AM

    amusing and well done

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  6. CynthiaAug 17, 2011, 1:29:00 PM

    Oh, this poem is so charming.

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  7. Tony NolandAug 17, 2011, 3:03:00 PM

    Thanks, guys. I tried like hell to work in a joke about Roman engineering, ala "Viaduct? Because it's not a chicken!", but I just couldn't pull it off within this limerick.

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  8. Old EggAug 17, 2011, 9:34:00 PM

    Loved it, next time draw her, sounds as though she is haf-ful too!

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  9. UnknownAug 19, 2011, 2:05:00 PM

    Cracked me up!
    http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2011/08/19/failed-migration/

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  10. ShailAug 21, 2011, 12:38:00 AM

    Funny! Loved it. :)

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