Wednesday #Poetry: Erode, Heart, Observe

Welcome to my regular Wednesday poetry corner, brought to you by Three Word Wednesday.

Today's words are: Erode, Heart, Observe.

Engine roared like fit to burst,
Heart desperate to cross the line first,
He set a cruel pace.
"God, 'erode a fine race,
But observe, now, his motorbike's cursed!"

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11 comments:

  1. Linda JacobsSep 7, 2011, 7:56:00 AM

    Very creative use of "erode"! I had to read it twice to get it. LOL

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  2. Rinkly RimesSep 7, 2011, 8:34:00 AM

    I, too, loved that creative use the of the word erode. Great originality.

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  3. christopherSep 7, 2011, 10:08:00 AM

    First I was going to holler "no fair" but instead I am saying "well done!"

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  4. DaydreamerSep 7, 2011, 12:16:00 PM

    I recently saw that Ghost Rider movie with Nicolas Cage.
    Nice use of the 3ww prompt.

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  5. gautami tripathySep 7, 2011, 12:31:00 PM

    Loved the way you used erode!

    hitching a ride in rusted trails

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  6. Andy SewinaSep 7, 2011, 12:33:00 PM

    Love the way this rhymes!

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  7. Sheilagh LeeSep 7, 2011, 1:26:00 PM

    love how you connected it to Ghostrider

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  8. Janet Lingel AldrichSep 7, 2011, 3:51:00 PM

    Clever way to include 'Erode' ... cool, Tony.

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  9. Tony NolandSep 7, 2011, 4:22:00 PM

    Thanks, everyone. I realize that I was breaking the rules a bit with 'erode - I crave your indulgence!

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  10. Old EggSep 8, 2011, 2:04:00 AM

    What is life without a bit of humour. Mind you I would have preferred "e'rode."

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  11. ShailSep 8, 2011, 7:22:00 AM

    Breaking the rule got us something really creative to read! Great.

    http://wordsinverse.wordpress.com/2011/09/08/unobserved-entrant/

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