This is the planet that God built.
This is the object, so heavy and dense,
that slammed into the planet that God built.
This is the speed, so truly immense, possessed by the object, so heavy and dense,
that slammed into the planet that God built.
This is the impact, horrific thunder,
caused by the speed, so truly immense, possessed by the object, so heavy and dense,
that slammed into the planet that God built.
This is the crust, torn all asunder, forced by the impact, horrific thunder,
caused by the speed, so truly immense, possessed by the object, so heavy and dense,
that slammed into the planet that God built.
This is the core, now superhot,
mixed with the crust, torn all asunder, forced by the impact, horrific thunder,
caused by the speed, so truly immense, possessed by the object, so heavy and dense,
that slammed into the planet that God built.
This is the plasma, (was solid, now not), that used to be core, now superhot,
mixed with the crust, torn all asunder, forced by the impact, horrific thunder,
caused by the speed, so truly immense, possessed by the object, so heavy and dense,
that slammed into the planet that God built.
This is ejecta, thrown out into space,
thrust by the plasma, (was solid, now not), that used to be core, now superhot,
mixed with the crust, torn all asunder, forced by the impact, horrific thunder,
caused by the speed, so truly immense, possessed by the object, so heavy and dense,
that slammed into the planet that God built.
This was two spheroids, now nary a trace, reduced to ejecta, thrown out into space,
thrust by the plasma, (was solid, now not), that used to be core, now superhot,
mixed with the crust, torn all asunder, forced by the impact, horrific thunder,
caused by the speed, so truly immense, possessed by the object, so heavy and dense,
that slammed into the planet that God built.
This is a debris field, caught up in a spin,
made from two spheroids, now nary a trace, reduced to ejecta, thrown out into space,
thrust by the plasma, (was solid, now not), that used to be core, now superhot,
mixed with the crust, torn all asunder, forced by the impact, horrific thunder,
caused by the speed, so truly immense, possessed by the object, so heavy and dense,
that slammed into the planet that God built.
This is new creation, now set to begin, from this debris field, caught up in a spin,
made from two spheroids, now nary a trace, reduced to ejecta, thrown out into space,
thrust by the plasma, (was solid, now not), that used to be core, now superhot,
mixed with the crust, torn all asunder, forced by the impact, horrific thunder,
caused by the speed, so truly immense, possessed by the object, so heavy and dense,
that slammed into the planet that God built.
This is the eon of a planet renewed,
after creation was again begun, from the debris field, horrifically spun,
made from two spheroids, now nary a trace, reduced to ejecta, thrown out into space,
thrust by the plasma, (was solid, now not), that used to be core, now superhot,
mixed with the crust, torn all asunder, forced by the impact, horrific thunder,
caused by the speed, so truly immense, possessed by the object, so heavy and dense,
that slammed into the planet that God built.
This is the iron - flowing, subdued - during the eon of a planet renewed,
after creation was again begun, from the debris field, horrifically spun,
made from two spheroids, now nary a trace, reduced to ejecta, thrown out into space,
thrust by the plasma, (was solid, now not), that used to be core, now superhot,
mixed with the crust, torn all asunder, forced by the impact, horrific thunder,
caused by the speed, so truly immense, possessed by the object, so heavy and dense,
that slammed into the planet that God built.
This is the magnet, ten thousand Gauss,
made by the iron - flowing, subdued - during the eon of a planet renewed,
after creation was again begun, from the debris field, horrifically spun,
made from two spheroids, now nary a trace, reduced to ejecta, thrown out into space,
thrust by the plasma, (was solid, now not), that used to be core, now superhot,
mixed with the crust, torn all asunder, forced by the impact, horrific thunder,
caused by the speed, so truly immense, possessed by the object, so heavy and dense,
that slammed into the planet that God built.
This is the water, the surface to souse, shielded by the magnet, ten thousand Gauss,
made by the iron - flowing, subdued - during the eon of a planet renewed,
after creation was again begun, from the debris field, horrifically spun,
made from two spheroids, now nary a trace, reduced to ejecta, thrown out into space,
thrust by the plasma, (was solid, now not), that used to be core, now superhot,
mixed with the crust, torn all asunder, forced by the impact, horrific thunder,
caused by the speed, so truly immense, possessed by the object, so heavy and dense,
that slammed into the planet that God built.
This is the Life - engendered, protected -
that arose from the water, the surface to souse, shielded by the magent, ten thousand Gauss,
made by the iron - flowing, subdued - during the eon of a planet renewed,
after creation was again begun, from the debris field, horrifically spun,
made from two spheroids, now nary a trace, reduced to ejecta, thrown out into space,
thrust by the plasma, (was solid, now not), that used to be core, now superhot,
mixed with the crust, torn all asunder, forced by the impact, horrific thunder,
caused by the speed, so truly immense, possessed by the object, so heavy and dense,
that slammed into the planet that God built.
This is Creation, with plans undetected, to bring about Life - engendered, protected -
that arose from the water, the surface to souse, shielded by the magnet, ten thousand Gauss,
made by the iron - flowing, subdued - during the eon of a planet renewed,
after creation was again begun, from the debris field, horrifically spun,
made from two spheroids, now nary a trace, reduced to ejecta, thrown out into space,
thrust by the plasma, (was solid, now not), that used to be core, now superhot,
mixed with the crust, torn all asunder, forced by the impact, horrific thunder,
caused by the speed, so truly immense, possessed by the object, so heavy and dense,
that slammed into the planet that God built.
All on the planet that God built.
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Help keep the words flowing.
The software is "PerfectIt", a product of Intelligent Editing. Some time ago, I was contacted by Daniel Heuman, the managing director of Intelligent Editing, who offered me the chance to put his product through its paces. The software comes in a standard version ($59) and a professional version ($99). I was given the latter. One big difference is that the standard version is limited to documents of 20,000 words or fewer. It might be suitable for memos, letters, stories or individual chapters, but you couldn't run a novella or full length novel with it.
In a long document, proofreading to match a house style is invaluable, but it's fussy, picky work. PerfectIt did a great job of finding these inconsistencies. For each, it listed all the variations for each phrase along with how many usages each had. By selecting each one, the cursor was taken to where it occurred in the document, so you can make the change by hand. This let me see if a variant usage was actually appropriate, given the context on that particular page. This also let me define and adhere to one standard "house style" for my book, such as using no hyphen when "super" is part of a class descriptor (supervillain or superhero), but using a hyphen where "super" is used as a adjectival modifier (super-hearing, super-strength).
